Guest Patrokles Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 I've been very lazy for several months now, but I have done a new song recently. I'm not sure if this is a demo or not. I generally always mean to re-record and improve all of my songs, but in the end I find that I'm always happiest with the first versions, which are all first-take, mistakes and all, etc. http://www.bensmusic.co.uk/Brook.mp3 Anyway, it's a true story about a time a couple of months ago that was really enjoyable, and a situation that has since turned really complicated and needn't be so crazy. But is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimbo 172 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Patrokles Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 It's not got to that stage yet! I wanted to make a few more morose songs at the minute, though, since I never felt I could before. No reason. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snoops 0 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 Cool! I think your music is great! And if it helps you to get through hard times by writing a song then thats even better. Good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Patrokles Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 Cool! I think your music is great! And if it helps you to get through hard times by writing a song then thats even better. Good work! You'll be the next person to get a song written about them, for sure! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ewerk 30167 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 Tbh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snoops 0 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 You'll be the next person to get a song written about them, for sure! How ultra brilliant! I have never had a song written about me before. Just make sure its nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Park Life 71 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 Cool! I think your music is great! And if it helps you to get through hard times by writing a song then thats even better. Good work! You'll be the next person to get a song written about them, for sure! Not a bad little track Verlaine. Like the big open strum pausey bits...6.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gemmill 44109 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 ultra brilliant! What. The. Fuck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Park Life 71 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 You'll be the next person to get a song written about them, for sure! How ultra brilliant! I have never had a song written about me before. Just make sure its nice I'm sure it's only a pre-ultra brilliant moment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sweetleftpeg 0 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 I thought it was canny if I'm being honest. Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Park Life 71 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 You'll be the next person to get a song written about them, for sure! How ultra brilliant! I have never had a song written about me before. Just make sure its nice Just realised it's your groupie talk innit?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Patrokles Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 I thought it was canny if I'm being honest. Well done. Ta very much. I'm still trying to find my niche, really. I feel like I get a bit closer with every effort, so I guess I just need to keep working at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gemmill 44109 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 Aye I thought it was alright. I was getting my groove on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Patrokles Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 You'll be the next person to get a song written about them, for sure! How ultra brilliant! I have never had a song written about me before. Just make sure its nice Just realised it's your groupie talk innit?? Dude, don't mess with my FAN CLUB. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Park Life 71 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 I thought it was canny if I'm being honest. Well done. Ta very much. I'm still trying to find my niche, really. I feel like I get a bit closer with every effort, so I guess I just need to keep working at it. I think you sound better with the synths personally. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Patrokles Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 Aye I thought it was alright. I was getting my groove on. Yeah, I could extend the outro somewhat. The end of the solo is also a little iffy. That's the thing I mean with not being sure whether something is finished or not, because if I tried to take time over it, do a slicker version, improve bits, etc, it might not work as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Patrokles Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 I thought it was canny if I'm being honest. Well done. Ta very much. I'm still trying to find my niche, really. I feel like I get a bit closer with every effort, so I guess I just need to keep working at it. I think you sound better with the synths personally. had a synth on, actually, for the second verse, but I took it out on reflection. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gemmill 44109 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 Aye I thought it was alright. I was getting my groove on. Yeah, I could extend the outro somewhat. The end of the solo is also a little iffy. That's the thing I mean with not being sure whether something is finished or not, because if I tried to take time over it, do a slicker version, improve bits, etc, it might not work as well. What you basically need is me on backing vocals. Maybe I could unleash some axe on it too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bombadil 0 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 Not bad, I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snoops 0 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 Just realised it's your groupie talk innit?? Aye. I have lots of different "talks" and groupie is just one of them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Patrokles Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 Just realised it's your groupie talk innit?? Aye. I have lots of different "talks" and groupie is just one of them You often get confused between the different types, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Park Life 71 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 Not bad, I like it. You record on your pc? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Patrokles Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 Not bad, I like it. You record on your pc? Me or Bombadil? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gemmill 44109 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 Not bad, I like it. You record on your pc? Me or Bombadil? Parky is the QUOTES MASTER!111 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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