The trials and tribulations of NUFC - blog article

[ajax_andy 0]

My latest blog article about Newcastle United can now be viewed here:

 

http://thenortheasthub.com/blog/trials-and-tribulations-of-nufc/

 

I reckon it'll cause a bit of debate so welcome any feedback and chat about it

 

Cheers

Andy

[Gene_Clark 12]

superficial, simplistic & broadly uncontentious; your target market isn't NUFC fans, who already know the club's history inside out

[Happy Face 29]

I didn't want to say it, but aye, that.

 

"Where did it all go wrong?" then no mention of Keegan, Kinnear, Shearer, Ashley, llambias, Wise or at a lower level Milner or Xisco.

[ajax_andy 0]

I didn't want to say it, but aye, that.

 

"Where did it all go wrong?" then no mention of Keegan, Kinnear, Shearer, Ashley, llambias, Wise or at a lower level Milner or Xisco.

 

Steady on I can only have 500 words

 

Wasn't really about what has gone wrong, it was more about saying actually you's are doing pretty well despite a habit of things going badly wrong from time to time, and how the club always seems to come back fighting no matter what

[Happy Face 29]

I know, I think it's fine for the non NUFC audience, but if you're going to be "the man in the North East" then, for example, most of us would not marvel at Krul adapting better than De Gea....because Krul has lived and trained and played in English football for 5 years before making the number 1 jersey his own. He had a lot less adapting to do this season.

 

You're asking for reviews from a picky audience

[ewerk 30620]

I don't think that you're ever going to be able to go into depth on any subject with a 500 word limit to be honest. If that is your constraint then you're best off concentrating on one very specific point rather than a general analysis that things are going well.

[ajax_andy 0]

Cheers for the feedback I'll take it on board

 

It's kind of supposed to be a general thing rather than indepth for just one clubs supporters to read, but I get what you's are saying that maybe this is a little too general and although it might be fine for other teams fans to read, I still need to make it in depth enough for the supporters of the club I'm writing about

[The Fish 10857]

Also, if you want to stand out, I'd try and be a bit more controversial. Halfway through a post about the relative successes of recent signings, call Richard Attenbrough a cunt.

[ajax_andy 0]

Also, if you want to stand out, I'd try and be a bit more controversial. Halfway through a post about the relative successes of recent signings, call Richard Attenbrough a cunt.

 

[Gene_Clark 12]

Also, if you want to stand out, I'd try and be a bit more controversial. Halfway through a post about the relative successes of recent signings, call Richard Attenbrough a cunt.

 

if i ever meet you, i'll buy you 3 pints of beer for that; funniest thing i've read in weeks